So it's been a while since I wrote on this blog and quite a bit of this has happened such as we finally finished our Humans of the South bay and Dia de los muertos project on November 2, 2015 and it was fun and many people showed up and it was bright and colorful but most of all it was fun. Anyways we started two different project since then, the first being the City of angles project or at least that's what I'm calling it and the second is the Book project. (I also came up with a name for this one two) This week we finally finished the City of Angles project which you can read about under the Spanish section.
The Book project on the other is barely beginning, we began by reading other articles that other students made and talk about what was good in the piece and what we should take away from it. Then we talked the different format of an article and how they can fit with our category we choose. I decide to make mine about Star Wars and the correct way to watch it but when I did my first draft I notice it wasn't something I can write a lot about so I decided to change the topic. For my up draft I completely change it to talk about Star Wars: The Clone Wars because I've been re-watching it recently, I had critiqued by many fellow classmate but the most useful one for me was from a classmate named Anayeli she told me to keep the intro the same. That was really helpful me since I was debating to myself about the intro since I thought about talking about The Force Awakens but on the other hand it was to cheesy. One thing I would really need help on for my work is grammar check because I can find a few couple of mistakes but I won't find them all, in fact I probably made a bunch of grammar mistakes in this blog.
Anyways I hope next week is a bit less stressful, I'm saying this because this week was short and we had to do a lot of job to do in little amount of time. Sadly I know that the next two weeks before winter break is also POL and POL prep week so that means my DP will look a lot more organized.
The Book project on the other is barely beginning, we began by reading other articles that other students made and talk about what was good in the piece and what we should take away from it. Then we talked the different format of an article and how they can fit with our category we choose. I decide to make mine about Star Wars and the correct way to watch it but when I did my first draft I notice it wasn't something I can write a lot about so I decided to change the topic. For my up draft I completely change it to talk about Star Wars: The Clone Wars because I've been re-watching it recently, I had critiqued by many fellow classmate but the most useful one for me was from a classmate named Anayeli she told me to keep the intro the same. That was really helpful me since I was debating to myself about the intro since I thought about talking about The Force Awakens but on the other hand it was to cheesy. One thing I would really need help on for my work is grammar check because I can find a few couple of mistakes but I won't find them all, in fact I probably made a bunch of grammar mistakes in this blog.
Anyways I hope next week is a bit less stressful, I'm saying this because this week was short and we had to do a lot of job to do in little amount of time. Sadly I know that the next two weeks before winter break is also POL and POL prep week so that means my DP will look a lot more organized.